Fast food is becoming one part of life everywhere; this has bad effects on our lifestyle and diet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
According to the statement, individuals mostly prefer to take junk meal in their diet, therefore this becomes one bit of everyone's life. This leads to numerous bad impacts on our way of life and foodstuffs. I completely agree with this criteria and reasons are discussed in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, in contemporary settings, everyone is stucked in busy and hectic lifestyle because of overstress of their works. It seems to be the major, first and foremost reason of this notion. Because, individuals do not enough time to prepare healthy meal at home due to their busy working schedule. Therefore, they prefer to ear fast food in hotels and restaurants so on such as pizza, burger and too many unhygienic foods which contain fat, varities of spices and so on in higher proportion. As a result, these foods lead to many health problems such as obesity which shows great negative impact on the personality factor of a person due to overweight.
Furthermore, in present duration, both parents do their own jobs and are being unavailable to take care of their child and their own foodstuffs. Due to which, they prefer to take street or junk food to save their cost effective time on cooking. This leads to bad impact on their child and his own health. In addition, the another major factor behind this is western culture. Because, modern generation want to live their way of life in western manner and they think, this also impressive their status. Due to this, they avoid home meal and promote to take prepackaged food which contains large variety of unhygienic spices and oils. As a result, this become leads to deficiency of essential nutrients and vitamins all in their body, therefore they face plenty of health problems.
To recapitulate, I personally consider that street food is unhygienic for healthy tone, because this food is prepared with unhealthy items and all which shows their bad impact on the lifestyle and foodstuffs of masses.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, in addition, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1633.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94848484848 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64081998841 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3422414296 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0625 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.625 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8125 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201325419008 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722020379952 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463443429022 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143335094779 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615741073316 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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