The fast food industry has negative effects on our health and family eating habits, Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, people seem to be busier than before because they have to work hard to earn enough money. With this, people think that fast food is suitable for those who have no time to cook for themselves or eat with family. However, the more the fast food industry develops, the more its bad effects on humans in extent areas, namely health and family eating habits.
First area that fast food has many negative influences on is the health of human beings. Almost all fast food contains a lot of calories, unhealthy fat, and chemicals. When people consume too much, it can cause some dangerous illnesses, such as dibate, high blood pressure, and heart attacks caused by cholesterol. Moreover, people add a great deal of sugar to fast food. Eating too much sugar causes weight gain, depression and stress.
The other is family eating habits, which is also affected by the fast food industry. As I mentioned, people choose to buy and eat at fast food stores to save time because they have less time to return. This can make other members of the family feel sad and disappointed. This is because they spend a lot of time preparing meals carefully in order to meet and talk with members who spend eight hours outside. In terms of people living alone, they can have difficulty cooking at home when they are on holiday. Going to fast food restaurants takes much more time than cooking at home.
In conclusion, I agree that the fast food industry has negative impacts on our health and family eating habits. Actually, fast food is really attractive but people need to consume it to an extent. Cooking at home is the best way to take care of themselves.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Nowadays, people seem to be busier than ...
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...he best way to take care of themselves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, moreover, really, so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70344827586 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30405732192 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562068965517 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.0883430857 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.2352941176 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0588235294 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295351956656 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110816126276 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131755453755 0.0667982634062 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208748436771 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0854122027576 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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