Fatherhood ought to be emphasized as much as motherhood .The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are responsible for bringing child up. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement.
Parents play vital role in our daily life. They are like the backbone of their children. As we know that, a woman endures the drastic physicology and emotional changes that pregnancy brings . Because of this, woman has the greatest right to decide on whether she will have a child or not and biggest responsibiltiy of upsurging the child than man. I believe that the idea is faulty and l explicate this on forthcoming paragraphs.
On one hand, ls it the responsiblity of both father and mother? Firstly, parent includes both father and mother. As we know that, earlier father was responsible for providing financial support and mother was answerable for rearing a child. But it is not right that mother should be responsible for nourish her child , father should be liable for this. Aside from that, father is prudent for upsurging child it is the only father who provide knowledge about the world and many sports activities. Also, father provides masculinity to boys. He tells to child about this. On the top of that, child's upbringing could never be perfect unless children gets the affection and care from both father and mother.
On the contrary,ls it the responsibilty of only mother?Probing ahead , in past decades women were restricted by the walls of house. But nowadays women do household as well as professional work. Women teach feminity to girls. In addition , women' s duty is to provide recognition of feeling to their children .for instance, if a mother drop her children to schothan it is responsiblity of father to pick children from school.
To recaptulate, it is the responsibilty of both father and mother for rearing their child. They should provide equal norms to their children. If parents provide good quality of life to their children, then their responsibility will fulfill.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, then, well, for instance, in addition, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03666666667 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81361935251 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.5083594636 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.55 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181677859202 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0551794914908 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504632095592 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105474414516 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.023357019345 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.36 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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