Fatherhood ought to be emphasized as much as motherhood .The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are responsible for bringing child up. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement.
In many cultures, societies expect women to be solely responsible for raising children simply because of their decision in child birth while fathers are allowed to enjoy fatherhood without having to bother too much about care needed by the child. This is harsh on women and role of father in nurturing children certainly should not be overlooked.
First and foremost, the notion that a woman alone decides having a child is mistaken. when Parenthood is planned by a couple, it is often based on a mutual understanding and hence, both partners are equally responsible for the care and development of their children. However, patriarchal societies all over the world often have a stereotype which relates a child's care with motherhood and women have to bear the brunt of such a fallacy. such an overly optimistic expectation on women is unreasonable and there should be a change in the way how society looks at fatherhood so that women alone are not held accountable for bearing and nurturing a child.
Moreover, in modern times due to dual careers it becomes even more expedient for both the parents to share their responsibilities equally for the child. What we practised in the past has to be changed as many situations have taken a U-turn from the past. For example, there are mostly one-child families in many developed countries which is a deviation from the last decades and also a testimony of the fact that working parents find it increasingly hard to manage to accommodate time and efforts needed in care of more than one child. Therefore, in these changing times when men and women are believed to be equal at workplace it will be unjust and inequitable for us to have unreasonable expectations on women for child's lone care.
In conclusion, decisions in family matters are often consensual and father has an equal role in giving birth and growing a child. Gender related stereotype for child care should end for women and responsibilities must be shared between the couple in bringing up children and work around the house. simply put, the way we look at fatherhood has to change.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, look, moreover, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1751.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9323943662 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7928636351 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529577464789 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.8043830679 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.692307692 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3076923077 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290778085652 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109872179629 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654669408651 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195344071648 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00506795831787 0.056905535591 9% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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