A few people debate that technological inventions like cell phones are making people socially less interactive . To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Humans invent things to make their social life more comfortable; , however, these technologies such as mobile phones have adverse effects too. I strongly agree with the latter view due to several reasons that I will discuss in greater detail in my essay.
To begin with, mobile phones have made communication faster and cheaper, thus one can easily reach their dear ones who are living in any part on the earth. It is also possible to say , as mobiles are becoming more smarter , people can share their special memories through social networks. To exemplify, nowadays people seamlessly share their personal messages, photos, documents on Facebook and WhatsApp easily through smartphones.
It goes without saying that mobiles have adverse effects too on the society. Children have become less active and contain themselves within the walls and play mobile games, consequently, they have fewer friends. Adults too have become socially inactive as they are well occupied in chit-chat with their buddies on social networking sites. Earlier people used to come out of their homes at night within society compounds for the get-together; however, such scenarios are less visible nowadays. Parents are too busy with their mobiles that they often forget to spend valuable time with their children; , thus, children feel isolated which affects their mindset too.
After having discussed the most pertinent points, I feel that the only logical conclusion is that while the invention of mobiles has provided more comfort to the society, it has broadened the social gap between people and given rise to the feeling of isolation among people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, so, thus, well, while, i feel, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37837837838 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46591944747 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640926640927 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7361151874 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.636363636 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5454545455 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.81818181818 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15490271385 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624844220572 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349792234421 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102764998604 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263141910869 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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