In today's world, more and more people abandon handwriting. This essay will first address the principal problems of this phenomenon and then give an opinion about this.
Nowadays, the number of people writing manually using a pen or pencil is significantly decreasing, and the causes of this lie in the prevalence of technological devices, such as computers. Many people are now computer literate and individuals have used them in all aspects of their lives. Children at schools, for instance, use computers as a learning tool and the majority of them do not use a notebook to take notes as they can be done using the devices. As a result, these young people are not used to manual note-taking. Therefore, more and more individuals are leaving behind the conventional writing tools.
Looking from all perspectives, I consider that this is a negative development because note-taking using a pen or pencil possesses numerous benefits. For students, manual note-taking allows them to learn faster. Students who learn new vocabulary by writing them in their notebooks are more likely to remember all of these new words because while doing so, their brains work optimally, leading to the improvement in brain function, and allowing the brain to collect all of this new information. As a result, the students can grasp the information easily.
To sum up, the principal factor contributing to less number of people using a pen or pencil to write is the improvement in technology giving individuals a more effective writing tool. This, however, poses a significant drawback as it can lower the ability of individuals to memorize what they are learning.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 553, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, so, then, therefore, while, for instance, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12267657993 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94326145048 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561338289963 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.6603412907 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201514216897 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759362963344 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608100137017 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126858181372 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0228404375505 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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