Fewer and Fewer your people are choosing to become a teacher. Why do young people don’t want to be teachers? How this could be changed?

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Fewer and Fewer your people are choosing to become a teacher. Why do young people don’t want to be teachers? How this could be changed?

There are plenty of streams for youngsters this days to opt their carrier instead of becoming a full-time tutor and teach students. Less respect and lower salary are some of the key reasons newer generations are less attracted to this field. This essay will be examining different issue related to this topic.

Individual generates less money as being an instructor and handsome money are awarded in other streams of carries so youth are less attracted to this field. Being Master at the young age is not appealing which makes this becomes of the least chosen carrier option among students. For example, a software engineer earns aprox 150K yearly whereas if they come in teaching industry then their salary will be around 60-70K which is less appealing in terms of revenue they generate from their labor.

And the other factor, society perception towards a teacher is not good where it’s often told that good students don’t engage in the education field. People who are not sold in any other field often work as a teacher which is another cause of less interest of youths in this field.

Incensement in their payrolls and appreciation are the recommended solution to attract youth attention towards teaching. Once individual earns like other fields in this teaching stream than automatically it will grab the attention of youngsters. For example, top-rated boarding schools in Kathmandu like Rato Bangala, Budhanilkantha, St Xavier, St Maries don’t get a shortage of teacher due to the high prestige and handsome income. So in order to lure youths to become a tutor is to pay high and appreciation of work.

To conclude, high wage and appreciation of work is very foremost thing government should do if they want to lure youths in the education industry.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...tract youth attention towards teaching. Once individual earns like other fields in t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, whereas, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10580204778 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65201549312 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556313993174 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0434196038 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.076923077 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5384615385 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.61538461538 7.06120827912 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187081921813 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065314092722 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434922708882 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0976026043576 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361454380458 0.056905535591 64% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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