People who go to live in other country should follow customs and traditions of the new country, to what extent do you agree or disagree!!
This is the age of globalization and everyone is free to live their life as their need and style, however, having said that, we should not forget the rituals and dresses of a certain particular country. I will be writing in the favor of every individual should follow the code and conduct of the country during their stay in the essay.
Dresses and rituals are the identity of people where they are living and whoever they are. Citizens feel proud of their dress and culture instead of using fashionable clothes of the modern world. For example, people who want to live in Saudi Arab should be following the rules of that particular country, for females, either it's by covering their head or wearing full-length attire. So that’s why every individual should the dress and ritual of that particular country during their stay.
Modern dresses and culture don’t give the meaning of life. Disconnected people from their roots are like the pendulum in the society or country who don’t have own attire and rituals. For example, Bhutan is one of the happiest national in the world during recent survey but for them, their traditional customs is so mattered of pride that every citizen wears without any hesitation, either its Royal family or Prime Minister. So to get the essence of life, a particular individual should follow the code and conducts that concerned nation.
To recapitulate, I strongly believe that anybody who accommodates in others country strictly needs to follow the rule and regulations in terms dress and traditions.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, for example, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1302.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06614785992 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58775634753 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556420233463 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7705908234 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.363636364 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3636363636 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192228479614 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758578734057 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469592302143 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12758753168 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.016590680081 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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