Figures show that in some countries, there is an ever-increasing proportion
of population aged 15 or younger. How do you think this effect current
status and the future of those countries?
There have been findings that show the proportion of people aged 15 and under is continuously increasing. From my point of view, this phenomenon has both negative and positive effects in current and future times.
In current times, there are several effects resulting from the booming growth in the population of younger generations but the most significant one is the shortage of important facilities such as hospitals, schools or kindergartens. In fact, because of weak immune system and uncompleted awareness, lots of effort and facilities are needed to nurture these children. Therefore, many developing countries may face a lack of crucial facilities for urgent cases. For example, children who is under 5 years old easily have diseases like asthma or angina so they may not have enough spaces in hospitals for too many kids .
On the other hand, this growth of youthful population will have big positive impacts than negative ones in the future. This young generations will become a strong and intelligent workforce, provide unlimited human resources to the development and industrialization of a country. In fact, businesses will also the opportunity to employ younger workers, who can be more creative and active than the old one. For example, many creative jobs such as designer need young generations who are easily catching the trends and ready to improve themselves day by day.
In conclusion, in current times, the biggest negative impact of the ever-increasing proportion of children aged 15 and under is significant due to the shortage of facilities. However, in the future, this population will serve a vigorous workforce, thus bringing benefit on society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 616, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3045112782 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97598480722 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593984962406 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5273973992 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.583333333 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.41666666667 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176596727058 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640587056441 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562559325607 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122286800532 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654858099773 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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