Advertisements can be seen from everywhere in people’s lives, from TV programs on the streets. It is a common believe that the popularity of advertisement has many disadvantages on our society. From my perspective, I completely agree with this view for several reasons.
The first argument given to support my opinion is that watching advertisements is a waste of time. All programs on TV from news to game shows contains advertisements. In fact, the hotter the shows are, the longer the ads are. Therefore, so as to watch a prevalent show, we have to spend more time on advertisements. For instance, a very hot live show like Miss Universe will have a 10-minute advertisement every half hour, this not only waste time but also reduce interest of people in these shows. If we do not have to watch these useless ads, we can save our time for more productive activities.
Another reason behind my belief is that these advertisements make people misspend money on purchasing unnecessary things. It is distorting people’s perspective on what is actually important in life. In fact, people are encouraged by ads to buy and own more stuffs than needed and through old things into environment. As a result, people not only waste money but also cause harm to our ecosystem. For example, a housewife who has much free time has a tendency to spend time on watching ads so these will promote her to buy new clothes although these are not actually necessary.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that the dominant of advertisement is useless because of wasteful time and money.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 237, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...are, the longer the ads are. Therefore, so as to watch a prevalent show, we have to spen...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, so, therefore, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 266.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91353383459 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01711111269 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1258056452 50.4703680194 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1333333333 104.977214359 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7333333333 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 7.25397266985 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186095400358 0.242375264174 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673809002714 0.0925447433944 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729290803503 0.071462118173 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105822027908 0.151781067708 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589439822809 0.0609392437508 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 12.6369458128 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.32886699507 92% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 55.0591133005 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 237, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...are, the longer the ads are. Therefore, so as to watch a prevalent show, we have to spen...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, so, therefore, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 266.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91353383459 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01711111269 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1258056452 50.4703680194 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1333333333 104.977214359 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7333333333 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 7.25397266985 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186095400358 0.242375264174 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673809002714 0.0925447433944 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729290803503 0.071462118173 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105822027908 0.151781067708 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589439822809 0.0609392437508 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 12.6369458128 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.32886699507 92% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 55.0591133005 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.