Financial education should be a compalsary because students rely on studies. This day education is most powerful weapon children build-out future. I my point of view knowledge needed on high school program.
Hence, several technology surrounded so many facilities available on online and offline video games, music, entertainment other so on then student forget about goal and awareness program should be conduct amount the folks. The also government try to enhance education and attractive offer should given then more student rival to study. Financial study is depend on family earning in come but financial support is week so student going in wrong way without education kid. En-educated person effect on society and social media or relationship. Without education our life is detriment impact or lot of labour and hard work do that. Education are growing up national and also effect on healthier, happier, and fitness life is relaxation life. Children learn financial along with high school program it's very elaborate and standard meaning of life or money.
On the flip side, kid have lot of subject learn in high school their under pressure and load of home work. Children have not much capacity to learn tot of things. En-educated people go away such as a crime, rapping, rubbies and plunder.
To summarise, financial management to students has both pros and cons. Financial education parents should afford lead to taught to students.
- Writing task 1 ielts liz 11
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 297, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[2]
Message: Did you mean 'have given' or 'give'?
Suggestion: have given; give
...e education and attractive offer should given then more student rival to study. Finan...
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Line 3, column 356, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
...dent rival to study. Financial study is depend on family earning in come but financial...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 149, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to tot'
Suggestion: to tot
...hildren have not much capacity to learn tot of things. En-educated people go away s...
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Line 7, column 114, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to lead'
Suggestion: to lead
...nancial education parents should afford lead to taught to students.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, then, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1219.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27705627706 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61885799464 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.8278771865 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.2666666667 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 7.06120827912 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24501964877 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790650911834 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503541958742 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147580550562 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06794288937 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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