The flowchart below shows the recycling process of aluminum cans.
The flowchart illustrates the stages that are required to recycle cans made out of aluminum.
Overall, each aluminum-can must go through a 6-stage process to be recycled. Additionally, the chart indicates that 74 percent of aluminum-cans have been undergone this process in the UK.
First, individuals have to separate their trash in order to be collected in special-purpose trash bins. After this, aluminum-cans will be cleared and sorted out so that they will be shredded into little pieces automatically. At the end of this stage, thorn apart pieces of aluminum will be compacted into certain size blocks. Then in the third stage workers will put these blocks into the heating device.
After heating the aluminum blocks, they are being passed through two cylindrical objects on top of each other to be flattened to a thickness of 2.5mm-6mm. Then, these aluminum plates will be recycled in several factories, so as in the end they would appear on markets shelves to be used again.
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- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 67
- Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Other say that there are more important environmental problems.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 61
- Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion. 56
- The diagrams below show the lifecycle of the silkworm and the process for producing silk cloth. 67
- The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent. 11
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, then, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 836.0 1615.20841683 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 162.0 315.596192385 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16049382716 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87346839318 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 176.041082164 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62962962963 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 506.74238477 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.5693777086 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.8888888889 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.44444444444 7.06120827912 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155083829328 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796042521742 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705266480412 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131143971825 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0742897444207 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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