Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
to what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?
These days, some individuals may indicate that there are too many different paths in front of them. On the other hand, others say that there is not a lot of choices in life to be taken. However, I believe that humans are different from species because of their ability to choose.
Starting with our basic life choices, there are a vast amount of options to decide on. For example, when we want to choose our university major; we are bombarded with a lot of subjects to study. Moreover, after we decide about what should we study, then there are choices of continuing university or apply for a job. Consequently, as we choose to open a door, we will see a room with more doors to choose from.
Furthermore, we have to decide in critical situations, also knows as moral dilemmas. In these situations, we wish that we did not have many choices. However, nowadays, our lives are so intertwined that any choices would affect others. Having these many choices are going to be overwhelming for many people. For instance, imagine a person who has the role of human resources in a company. This person has a choice to hire someone or even make an employee redundant. So, we can see that a position can give many options.
In conclusion, there is no doubt about the increase in people's choices in their everyday life. This is because of the emergence of many new alternatives and the involvement of people in each other's lives.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-11-21 | vantran2297 | 89 | view |
| 2019-10-06 | cocolico14 | 56 | view |
| 2019-09-21 | ThuBella | 56 | view |
| 2019-09-21 | ThuBella | 56 | view |
| 2019-08-15 | Bejchekkx | 73 | view |
- Whoever controls the media also controls opinions and attitudes of the people and there is little that can be done to rectify this. 61
- Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion. 56
- The diagrams below show the lifecycle of the silkworm and the process for producing silk cloth. 67
- The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. 67
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 63, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...viduals may indicate that there are too many different paths in front of them. On the other ha...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s because of their ability to choose. Starting with our basic life choices, th...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 57, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'amounts'?
Suggestion: amounts
...ur basic life choices, there are a vast amount of options to decide on. For example, w...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1186.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70634920635 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59705472558 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575396825397 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 16.7293482763 49.4020404114 34% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.125 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237787434204 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739779294531 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550692467535 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126154398644 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314131979582 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.