Fossil fuels are the main source of energy in many parts of the world. However, in many countries people are encouraging the use of other energy sources instead of the non-renewable energies. Certainly, it is a positive development and a number of argumemts surround my opinion, which I shall discuss in the following essay.
The main advantage of using alternative energy sources is that, we would be able to save the non-renewable sources for the
next generation. It is not hidden from the anyone that the energy sources like coal, petroleum, water etcetra are decreasing at an alarming rate, hence if natural sources could be used as an alternative energy source then we would be able to save these exhaustible resources for the future.For instance, many farmers in India are using solar panels to generate electricity.
Secondly, the natural sources do not pollute environment. Global warming is noteworthy issue these days, every part of the planet is affected by this. Indeed, the depletion of protective layer is caused by the use of by-products of fossil fuels. Therefore, if the use of fossil fuels will be reduced by the usage of natural sources then it will be beneficial for the whole planet.
Paradoxically, the use of alternative sources has some hurdles, as the cost of setting up the solar panels and wind farms is high. Moreover, they depend on geographical locations and weather conditions, such as if the weather conditions are bad then solar panel might not work. In addition to this, the repair of these large panels is not practically possible.
In conclusion, it is irrefutable that using natural resources will be a boon for the whole world because of the umpteen benefits. Although, there are some demerits but the downfalls can be overlooked as compared to the merits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05685618729 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84550334678 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.990867482 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3571428571 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21428571429 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305119151934 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108770004943 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0912094959804 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164675219587 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0790744941022 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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