A four week’s holiday can make employees do better at job. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
People think that staff can work harder at companies which include 4 weeks of holiday. This essay will discuss in the following paragraph.
In my point of view that I will not support this statement. Due to the amount of work is overloaded which employees should be relaxed on some special vacation. It is unnecessary for them to go to work every day to keep work. They can do that at home through days off so that they still keeping work without at there. In addition, breaks can provide psychological benefits by reducing stress after facing many deadlines and projects day by day or even on the weekends. Furthermore, they can improve their emotion and boost more energy for work after the holiday which takes many efficiencies at companies. Therefore, a well-paid salary and target will be more easily for you to gain.
Consequently, more stress and pressure for people in their mental if they don’t have time to relax. This situation leads to workload efficiency will be reduced and influence in promote position in the future. Moreover, it takes seriously for staff who work too much include many days off on holiday that causes them to be depressed or even autism, threat their fitness and health.
In conclusion, although just take a short holiday, I strongly believe that it is enough for people to take a break and have more motivation at work and life as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1144.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80672268908 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56458486779 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59243697479 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2835883388 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3076923077 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123485006662 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450117266357 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054765639766 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0798323648839 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467619241623 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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