Many modern media nowadays has played a huge impact on human life. There is an argument that addicting social media has these advantages are outweighing the disadvantages.
Watching films, television series, videos, or modern media in general, which is popularly considered for relaxing and entertaining times at home. Thanks to the modern technology, we now have many ways for watching things, including TV programs, Netflix or You Tube, providing us an extensive environment with variety of options for watching. Therefore, people have been observed to be really addicted to media applications. It’s believed that the advantages of modern media are outweighing the disadvantages.
The first feature of modern media making people extremely enjoy is its convenience and simplicity. We are able use them almost everywhere, demanded only an electronic device with Internet connection, which is not hard to find. Obviously house is a perfect place to relax and enjoy movies and videos as well as handily available food in kitchen. It must be very comfortable, likeable to eat during the movies. However, this is one of reasons causes several physical health, regarding to obesity and diabetes, emerged from eating too much sweet and greasy food. Moreover, instead of doing outside activities, essential for our physical health, we would like to hang on You Tube and Netflix.
Program is also a good choice to have interesting entertainments, relaxing, thrilling, or just killing times for some individuals. In addition, websites of Netflix and You Tube contain a lot of contents, affecting directly to our curiosity, that why we regularly can stop trying new contents. Movies and videos on websites have an extraordinary number, uploaded rapidly every moment. As a consequence, lots of time have been consumed inappropriately day by day, likely leading to poor performance in working and studying. One of dangerous effect is mental problems, lack of sleep, even depression, relatively resulting from bad time distribution and social connection.
Undoubtedly that modern media always has both side, positive and negative. Recently, the advantages are outweighing its disadvantages, supporting by human’s hobbies and patterns. Everybody has a right to decide what they want. So, modern media is good or bad depending on our decision, on how we are using them.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e distribution and social connection. Undoubtedly that modern media always has...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, moreover, really, regarding, so, therefore, well, in addition, in general, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1852.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43108504399 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03351704183 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656891495601 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.6963281353 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4736842105 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9473684211 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.89473684211 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187823332919 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615970205885 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777067937586 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121833455122 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0857887501422 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e distribution and social connection. Undoubtedly that modern media always has...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, moreover, really, regarding, so, therefore, well, in addition, in general, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1852.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43108504399 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03351704183 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656891495601 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.6963281353 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4736842105 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9473684211 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.89473684211 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187823332919 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615970205885 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777067937586 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121833455122 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0857887501422 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.