In the future all cars,buses,and trucks will be driverless.The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers.
Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?
With the aid of technology development as today, there are some automated car models available to use.Therefore, experts predict that in the future all vehicles driven on streets would be driveless despite the fact that some may concern about the threat of job losses as well as security issues in this field.In my view ,I firmly believe that the benefits are outweigh them.
To begin with ,there are several drawbacks might occur provided that cars ,buses, trucks become unmanned.The first one could be security problems.Indeed ,automated vehicles would have to share the same control system and their data may turn into hackers’ target.As a result ,even a small hack could wreck dramatic damage on busy roads causing collisions and traffic accidents.Another issue is that many drivers would lose their occupations.This means trucks, buses would be controlled by artificial directions rather than humans.However ,those problems could be tackled by the governments if they advance the security system and creating other employment.
Beside those issues are mentioned above ,driverless vehicles could resolve many problems existing nowadays.Firs t,road accidents occur as drivers who drive in a drunk or distracted state .The automated vehicles ,in the other hand, are controlled by sophisticated system and algorithms ,which are calculated to eliminate most chances can cause accidents. Another benefit is traffic would be more and more effective and efficient.The reason behind this is all vehicles run on one system with specified distance from each other and no driver could break the rules .This may lead to reducing traffic jams, and the transportation would become faster.
Bottom line ,driverless vehicles certainly bring positive effects.Even though some issues such as unemployment or security breaches may arise ,I personally feel that advantages as reduction in accidents and traffic are more vital.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, as to, such as, as a result, as well as, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1639.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55593220339 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94440295507 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64406779661 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 49.0 20.2975951904 241% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 191.307489544 49.4020404114 387% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 273.166666667 106.682146367 256% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 49.1666666667 20.7667163134 237% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.6666666667 7.06120827912 264% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.01903807615 598% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17293024632 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795400211412 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384963542235 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107176660825 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00839687790683 0.056905535591 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.3 13.0946893788 224% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 13.28 50.2224549098 26% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.6 11.3001002004 209% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.86 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.67 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 9.78957915832 306% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.6 10.1190380762 213% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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