In future, it seems it would be difficult to live on earth. Some people think more money should be spent researching on other planets to live such as mars.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is undeniable true that due to changing in environmental conditions it is hard to live on the earth. However, it is considered by few group of people for better living they should spend highest amounts to search other places on galaxy to live. Although, I definitely against to those and affirm that every human should maintaining their nature towards to earth for efficient perspectives.
To begin with, it is evidently proven that human nature play significant role for the environment, in spite of to spent more on experimenting administrative of each nation as well as people have to keep up their approach and habits of lifestyle. In other words, owing to pollution and unhygenical practices today's materialistic world has some dramatics changes which affected to people day to day life. For example, according to " National Geographic Media", by deforestation in several parts of the Brazil Oxygen was recorded lower than 2.5% fallen noticeably. Thus, it is necessary to overcome that issue by saving natural resources.
Furthermore, despite of spending expenses on research, if person spends their quality ratio of capitals on recreational sectors or in some campaign to enlightening generation for better world, because of that one person avoid to do some unethical behaviour which harm to environment and became disaster. Moreover, inhabitants of the particular country should not to spend their money to find new planets because it is quite expensive for their pockets. To illustrates, still many researchers does not get any positive response to give results for living on other uncertain planets like Mars.
In conclusion, it is irrefutable evidence that today more and more people have to face problem rewarding living life on earth. Yet, I believe that to make a perfect environment and better lifestyle it is responsibility to everyone people to change our practices for that.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 134, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun group seems to be countable; consider using: 'few groups'.
Suggestion: few groups
...the earth. However, it is considered by few group of people for better living they should...
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Line 1, column 184, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'spend the highest'.
Suggestion: spend the highest
...of people for better living they should spend highest amounts to search other places on galax...
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Line 1, column 257, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ther places on galaxy to live. Although, I definitely against to those and affirm...
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Line 3, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...fficient perspectives. To begin with, it is evidently proven that human nature...
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Line 3, column 417, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to people day to day life. For example, according to ' National Geographic ...
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Line 5, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...aving natural resources. Furthermore, despite of spending expenses on research...
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Line 5, column 222, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'avoid doing'.
Suggestion: avoid doing
...etter world, because of that one person avoid to do some unethical behaviour which harm to ...
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Line 7, column 132, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lem rewarding living life on earth. Yet, I believe that to make a perfect environ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as, in other words, in spite of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30263157895 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00875194996 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621710526316 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.8450767317 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.333333333 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.75 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203126334942 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736258152355 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548379311994 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1236077502 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387140749419 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.