In the future, nobody will buy printed newspaper or books becouse they will be able to read everthing they want online without paying.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.
Nowadays, majoritiy of people read books and newspaper becouse they are very useful for their life but in the future nobody will buy printed newspaper and books becouse they are prefer online reading and without paying. I complately disagree this statement.
First of all, nowadays people read books and newspaper becouse they are most of to be going to enterence at the universtitute therafore they are read books but currently oldest people buy every day. For example : my neighboure old women he usually buy new newspaper from the press and read a lots of. In the foregian countryes for instance: China, America and Germany and others. Their all of them read books even too children becouse they very intresting be educated. Therafore this countryes devaloping than our.
Secondly, there are two defect reading in online. If people read in online demage their eyes becouse telephone and compyuter very illness and if people read liyeing at home they are very advance very less consequently this be cause people gain weight and a lots of illness appear and this is very ill wicked situation. For example : I have got a friend and his brother in my childhood then his brother read books in telphone and never playing fodboll and other games he was ill 20 years ago then to be a very flat. Therafore we are dont used to this situation.
In conclusion, therafore we must buy after than read books and newspaper. But we are read online read the way very dengrous our life in my opinion.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'preferred'.
Suggestion: preferred
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Suggestion: buys
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...y new newspaper from the press and read a lots of. In the foregian countryes for inst...
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Line 5, column 224, Rule ID: BE_CAUSE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'because'?
Suggestion: because
...ery advance very less consequently this be cause people gain weight and a lots of illnes...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, second, secondly, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1236.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.828125 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45037276002 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51953125 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.8689308911 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0769230769 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6923076923 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46153846154 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32192406431 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118347622101 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110675806239 0.0667982634062 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239723095145 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.151520362383 0.056905535591 266% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.