The charts below show the avarage percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much
The pie charts show the avarage percentage of sodium, saturated fats and added sugars in typical meals consumed in the USA.
A large proportion of changes was in sodium.That is dinner which is occupied almost a half.In sodium, both of snacks and breakfast were constituted just under a quarter.Overwhelmingly lunch a little more than snacks and breakfast,that is to say included in approximately a quarter.If we look at the saturated fat,we can see snacks and breakfast a little more than sodium.Snacks organized 27 percentage.The biggest part of saturated fat by change in dinner.And the least part of breakfast.Breakfast almost occupied half of the diagram.Moderatly part of lunch,that is to say it was included approximately a quarter.A significant majority of parts changed in added sugar.The biggest proportion of added sugar is snacks.It was included in almost a half. A small part of diagram,it was breakfast that is to say it was occupied just under a quarter.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 815.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25806451613 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.68141265923 2.65546596893 139% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535483870968 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 22.4926829268 227% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 302.418400381 43.030603864 703% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 271.666666667 112.824112599 241% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.6666666667 22.9334400587 225% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 5.23603664747 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 1.69756097561 1001% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0524772765849 0.215688989381 24% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813438483187 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109248090259 0.0843802449381 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121497289442 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114273050388 0.0819641961636 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.2 13.2329268293 221% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 19.71 61.2550243902 32% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.51609756098 224% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 10.3012195122 225% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.12 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.06136585366 122% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 11.4329268293 262% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.4 10.9970731707 204% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 11.0658536585 271% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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