In this contemporary era, advancement in technology play crucial role almost in every field specially in education. One can easily access the data what he want. I agree with the statement that in future everyone will use online data. I think this way for several reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, the most beneficial part to use online material is to save time. We can clear our doubt within seconds just by typing problem on google and there will be series of solutions. In addition we can search it from any corner of the world. We don't need a specific location to get it such like printing material which genrelly can acquire from book shop or library. It is very easy to use online material. My own experience is the evidence of this. A few months ago, I had online interview. I got the mail form university website that you are selected for interview and have the interview next week. But i was out of town and obvious didn't had my books them one of my classmates suggests me to search soft copy of this book online, thanks to my friend along with that soft version of that book i also found the solution at the end of file if I need it. This less time consuming and easy access of material is best reason there will be more demand of online material.
Moreover, we are more updated due to more online access . The printing newspaper we have get next day morning which had news of that happened 24 hours ago. But on social media, we can see most of them live and can help the witness. On top of that, online data is free of cost.
For printing newspaper, on the other hand, we have to pay at the end of every month. To exemplify, a survey was conducted in my university to confirm whether they watch online news or printing newspaper. Eighty percent of them reply for online. Because there is no need to wait for newspaper or pay for it. In addition we get world wide highlighted new for every our and can get from every corner of the world. Most of people today are having more mobility due to their job so it will be easy for them to get new online. In case of printing data, material need more care to maintain them for long use and some space to preserve and out of reach of children.
In conclusion, online material is most useful than printing form. In upcoming days, people will use soft format of material instead hard one because of it can be obtain free of cost and because it is less time consuming and can read in this format from anywhere.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 156, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
... One can easily access the data what he want. I agree with the statement that in fut...
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Line 3, column 194, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...d there will be series of solutions. In addition we can search it from any corner of the...
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Line 3, column 253, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...rch it from any corner of the world. We dont need a specific location to get it such...
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Line 3, column 613, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...w and have the interview next week. But i was out of town and obvious didnt had m...
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Line 3, column 643, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...week. But i was out of town and obvious didnt had my books them one of my classmates ...
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Line 3, column 915, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
...e consuming and easy access of material is best reason there will be more demand of onl...
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Line 6, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...emand of online material. Moreover, we are more updated due to more online a...
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Line 6, column 57, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e more updated due to more online access . The printing newspaper we have get nex...
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Line 6, column 82, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e online access . The printing newspaper we have get next day morning which had n...
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Line 6, column 92, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'got', 'gotten'.
Suggestion: got; gotten
...ccess . The printing newspaper we have get next day morning which had news of that...
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Line 6, column 237, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f them live and can help the witness. On top of that, online data is free of cost...
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Line 7, column 98, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...at the end of every month. To exemplify, a survey was conducted in my university ...
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Line 7, column 312, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...to wait for newspaper or pay for it. In addition we get world wide highlighted new for e...
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Line 7, column 328, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: worldwide
...paper or pay for it. In addition we get world wide highlighted new for every our and can g...
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Line 7, column 328, Rule ID: WORLD_WIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'worldwide'?
Suggestion: worldwide
...paper or pay for it. In addition we get world wide highlighted new for every our and can g...
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Line 7, column 413, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the people') or simply say ''Most people''.
Suggestion: Most of the people; Most people
...can get from every corner of the world. Most of people today are having more mobility due to t...
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Line 9, column 67, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...rial is most useful than printing form. In upcoming days, people will use soft for...
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Line 11, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... this format from anywhere. Moreover,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, second, so, i think, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 24.0651302605 220% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 41.998997996 164% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2053.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 466.0 315.596192385 148% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.40557939914 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64618479453 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29733219986 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487124463519 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 662.4 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 16.0721442886 168% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.9993427024 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.037037037 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2592592593 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92592592593 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203858747755 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543013692383 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455410155768 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116194390421 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285355318262 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.0946893788 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 12.4159519038 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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