Truly, advancement in technology make our life easy and comfort. One can easily access data from internet. It seems in future, everyone will try to focus on online material because of free of cost and less time consuming to clear concept and collecting information. However it is partially true because not everything easily found on internet. I think this way for several reasons, which i will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, the most fundamental reason is to use the online data is we can learn things quickly by searching on specific topic with three dimensional visual representation. Nowadays there are many online classes available so one can easily enrolled in these classes and able to solve his doubt. On the other hand, the printing material is time consuming we have to turn every page to reach at specific chapter of book and have to maintain to use it for longer time. Sometime even to clear a single doubt we have to go throughout the many books, which either have to buy or can get from library, which is lengthy process to learn and i9n case online system of course its free of cost as well as time saving. In addition, there are lot of printing mistakes found in hard copies because its is not changing but in case online material one can edit it.
However, in some cases it seems easy and more convenient to use printing data. As one can not access everything for free. In that case like some specific material can get only via using specific software in laptop. This may led to pay heavy price to buy such material and laptop to run this program. Not everyone can afford laptop and software to acquire data. My own experience is the evidence of this. Even though i have my personal laptop but i prefer hard copy of material because the printing data was far less priced than online one. and sometimes we get currpt file in online system.
In conclusion, online material is easily found sometimes free of cost and time saving but not everything can be obtain online in that case we need printing material and online data require laptop or other software to run which may be not affordable for everyone or sometime due to poor internet connection we faces problem in searching it on internet.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, well, i think, in addition, in conclusion, of course, as well as, in some cases, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1841.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 394.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67258883249 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43938735815 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48730964467 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 612.0 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.3980251274 49.4020404114 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8947368421 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7368421053 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36842105263 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143399893158 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450432465082 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350246671151 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0986734497782 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0179227418733 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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