Some people believe that printed newspaper and books will be unnecessary due to they can read everything in the internet without paying in the future. I totally disagree with this view because printed newspaper or books always have a place in our lives and not all online reading materials are free of charge.
In my opinion, printed materials always have significant meanings. In some special cases, some originals of unique books are kept in museums as items of value. Furthermore, many people choose to buy printed newspaper or books because they value the experiment of reading or collecting physical books. In fact, some people have preference for smell of paper that why they appeal to holding a book when reading. Or others seek to buy every paperback which are written by their favourite author to have their own physical collection.
I also believe that people will not be able to read everything online without paying in the future. Most current reading websites require reader to sign up for premium account with a small amount of money to able to everything on these websites. The survival of these reading websites depends on mainly on this amount of money.
In conclusion, we can not negate the importance of printed materials. I strongly disagree the statement that people will no longer pay for printed newspaper or books and they can read everything in online ways.
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- The chart below shows the results of a survey about people s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1154.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97413793103 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54390694495 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530172413793 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 366.3 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2836485511 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1666666667 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.414698842344 0.244688304435 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151692887952 0.084324248473 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12977045021 0.0667982634062 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270180638278 0.151304729494 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0941451522572 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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