I partily agree that people may read books or newpapers online rather than buy physical form of them since people can read them online on free. Since free to read them may not be the only reason for them to read them online.
The development of mobile phone and internet have change people's reading habit. Nowaday, having a mobile phone can let us easy to connect with the world. We can know what is happening in every conner of the world easily and immediately since the internet is keep updating. Different from tranditional book and newpaper, the publishment of them may take a day or a week. It take some time for reader to see the updatest or latest version of them. However, author or reporter can update their work to the public in anytime on the internet and people can see it immedately. And it is important for news because if there have any serious things happen suddently like fire or some accident affect whole city, people can know them from the internet in a short time and prepare for them. People nowaday have already used to know every in a short time, and printed newpapers and books cannot fulfill the need of moden people, so most of them will read them onlien rather than buy them from the physical store.
Moden peoples are used to get free information on the internet easily. In the past, people can saw most the contents in books and newspapers after the pay for it. So they need to buy another if they did not like its content. However, if we face the same problem now, we can just enter the key words of the content from a book or newspaper on the search engine to look for other sources about it. And no any money people need to pay for the above action. Beside the diversity of choice, the change on the operation mode of the publisher of book and newspaper in also one the the reasons. Most of them will not direct charge reader for each of their content. There will be some advertisment on their website or APPs. The more people enter their website, the more income they can earn from the advertisment. So most of the publisher will let free to read as a incentive to attrack reader and gain profit from the advertisment.
- The chart below shows the results of a survey about people s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant 65
- The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 67
- Many people think that some individuals are naturally good leader Others think that people can learn leadership skills Discuss both views 11
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 82
- Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is impor 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 374, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'takes'?
Suggestion: takes
...nt of them may take a day or a week. It take some time for reader to see the updates...
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Line 3, column 686, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...en suddently like fire or some accident affect whole city, people can know them from the int...
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Line 5, column 290, Rule ID: KEY_WORDS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'keywords'?
Suggestion: keywords
...same problem now, we can just enter the key words of the content from a book or newspaper...
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Line 5, column 401, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...to look for other sources about it. And no any money people need to pay for the ab...
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Line 5, column 571, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...isher of book and newspaper in also one the the reasons. Most of them will not direct c...
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Line 5, column 571, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...isher of book and newspaper in also one the the reasons. Most of them will not direct c...
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Line 5, column 856, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... the publisher will let free to read as a incentive to attrack reader and gain pr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1768.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 395.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47594936709 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2566805166 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.46582278481 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1152885538 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0526315789 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7894736842 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.68421052632 7.06120827912 24% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156775489724 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537637210647 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433182014625 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115022475879 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390451438074 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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