The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart have stated out the data about the situation of households in owned and rented accommodation in england and wales between 1918 and 2011. it can be observed that this two group of data of a different tendency.

For the family was owned a property, there have only nearly 20 percent family was owned a property.In the following year, the percentage is in a slowly increasing tendency.In 2011, the percentage have increase into around 60 percent.

For the family was rented an accommodation, there have almost 80 percent of family that rented an accommodatin. In the period between 1918 and 2011, the percentage have presented a decreasing tendency. In 2011, there just have around 30 percent family was rented an accommodation.
To sum up, by using the following information, it can be analyzed that the economic To sum up, by using the following information, it can be analyzed that the economic situation or the value of assets of the citizen at england and wales have been boosted. Most of them have the ability to purchase their own property so they do not need to rent them.situation or the value of assets of the citizen at england and wales have been boosted. Most of them have the ability to purchase their own property so they do not need to rent them.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 295, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
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Line 3, column 275, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...tage is in a slowly increasing tendency.In 2011, the percentage have increase into...
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Line 5, column 468, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'accommodation'.
Suggestion: accommodation
... style='font-size: 19.36px;'> an accommodation. To sum up, by using the following inf...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 5.60731707317 285% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1943.0 965.302439024 201% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 258.0 196.424390244 131% => OK
Chars per words: 7.53100775194 4.92477711251 153% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 5.97166581622 2.65546596893 225% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.449612403101 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.9 283.868780488 175% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.45097560976 131% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.2963613877 43.030603864 196% => OK
Chars per sentence: 215.888888889 112.824112599 191% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6666666667 22.9334400587 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.88888888889 5.23603664747 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0554263569506 0.215688989381 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0467508377645 0.103423049105 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.034219245612 0.0843802449381 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0519951216107 0.15604864568 33% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0125289397908 0.0819641961636 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.4 13.2329268293 215% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 17.68 61.2550243902 29% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.51609756098 224% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.8 10.3012195122 173% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 26.99 11.4140731707 236% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 27.0 11.0658536585 244% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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