Many rich countries are facing situation that some group of people are poor and cannot have good quality of living. They are still controversial issues and only government who has the best ability to fix this.
There are many countries having the issue about huge number of poor citizens in their country even wealthy countries like America and British. This is mainly happened because of lacking education. Those people they cannot work in office or manufacturer as they do not have proper expertise. As well, in rich countries always have high cost of living, it is difficult for them to rent an apartment or even buy a food. Entrepreneurs know this and hire them at under minimum rate which is difficult to survive in a cruel metropolis. Finally, struggling people turn themselves into criminals, drug dealers or burglars. These are issues that need to be fixed as soon as possible.
Even through, the problems are unlikely to have solution, we still can relieve them by the helping of government’s policy. First, it is not the right solution to give them money to extend them survive while many places do. The right solution is creating knowledge and vocational skills. In fact, government should set up a school for those particular poorer citizens. This will give them permanent skills instead of temporary solution. Anyway, daily living cost are going higher everyday as inflation never stop. However, with government policy they can tie up pricing for some categories like electricity, water, gas, and accommodation by reducing tax or controlling price. So that struggling people can live easier and pay less for necessary payment.
In conclusion, beggars are in every country only the percentage is high or low where only government actions will relieve this problem.
- Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. 97
- Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 89
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
- The graph below shows the consumption of fish and different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 78
- The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 410, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'food'.
Suggestion: food
...r them to rent an apartment or even buy a food. Entrepreneurs know this and hire them ...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 551, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to people'
Suggestion: to people
...a cruel metropolis. Finally, struggling people turn themselves into criminals, drug de...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 485, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...way, daily living cost are going higher everyday as inflation never stop. However, with ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, finally, first, however, if, so, still, well, while, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1404109589 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71506667888 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619863013699 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3282962851 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.3888888889 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2222222222 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61111111111 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133829922648 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0393379656926 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0299763966913 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0866255713991 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.015277948202 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.