The gap between rich and poor is growing. What problems does this create? What can be done to tackle them.
It is undeniable that a remarkable difference is enormously increasing between the lifestyles of rich and poor class of people.
It has created a lot of problems in many countries and find the solutions for these problems. This essay will discuss the problems created and possible solutions.
Many problems are created by this phenomena. First and foremost, a huge difference in the lifestyles of well-off and poor people owing to technology. To demonstrate, houses of prosperous are flooded with different electronic devices like washing machine, television, mobile, fridges e.t.c. These all devices make the life of affluent people easier and convenient. But, the life of poor people are harder and also difficult for them to make available of foods for one day. In addition to that, children of well-off family can pay high tuition fees in the renowned universities. As a result, they will receive high qualified education. But, children from poor background will fail to achieve education from qualified teachers due to lack of treasures to pay tuition fees.
What is needed to combat these problems is definite action. Government should make the policy that people cannot raise the prices of product enormously. Due to which all people can enjoy the products equally. Furthermore, Universities should make the scholarships or low tuition fee schemes to the people of poor background.
In the conclusion, there are evidences which show the problems face by poor people due to the growing gap between rich and poor people. But, it is also clear that there are solutions to tackle the arising problems.I think Government Should make the policy which will benefit the poor and compassionate people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, well, i think, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1187.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25221238938 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75903672606 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570796460177 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.2633312961 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3076923077 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3846153846 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192969713718 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709051600666 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723757736221 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134828089249 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621845456523 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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