The gap between the rich and the poor is increasingly wide, as rich people become richer and poor people grow poorer. What problems could this situation cause? What are the solutions to address those problems?
It is undeniable that the distinction between the rich and poor is growing wider in many regions in the world. While problems associated with this would bring an unpredictable outcome, fundamental measures should be adopted to tackle the issues.
Rising levels of poverty and wealth inequalities adversely impact a country's economic growth and its citizens’ security.One major consequence is that a large number of unemployed or low-paid labor forces have an effect on the domestic business, for example, local shops, factories or supermarkets. As these people do not earn enough money to afford products, shop owners are forced to close down their shops, due to higher unemployment rate. In terms of the security of society, the poor may commit crimes such as robbery, drug trafficking and worse since they can not obtain money through work. The high unemployment rate in youth has been reported to be related to rising crime rate.
To address and resolve these issues, the government should provide more educational opportunities for citizens, to narrow the distance between the rich and poor. By expanding a better standard of schooling to slums of the urban areas and rural regions, children are able to attain higher education levels. Scholarships and fundings also help students to remain in their studies and pursue further education. For instance, technical education could be expanded to help poorer students learn trades. In several fields like medicine, agriculture or engineering, a well-educated workforce is required in the near future, and skilled workers will be able to have higher income to enjoy a decent life. Moreover, vocational courses should be provided for dropout students or low-skilled workers, in order to reduce the unemployment rate in the labor source. As employment opportunities increase, crime rates will fall.
In conclusion, there are many problems linked to the increasing gap. Dealing with the issues at its root by expanding access to education is needed, therefore, the gap between the rich and poor can be reduced.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 120, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: One
...nomic growth and its citizens’ security.One major consequence is that a large numbe...
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Line 2, column 150, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... security.One major consequence is that a large number of unemployed or low-paid labor forces hav...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1738.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33128834356 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86255985732 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628834355828 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7831743467 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.866666667 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161716288846 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563956619233 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678025402185 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12035837668 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732607867937 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.