There's no doubt about the undeniable changes in human life span in the modern world. Many factors are playing essential roles in this change. In my perspective, the most critical parameter is the improvements in our diets. I will pinpoint the two most prominent rationales in what follows.
The first reason to champion this standpoint is that humans achieved various technologies during history, which helped them harvest crops more efficiently. Due to these agricultural enhancements, more food is available for us to consume and livestock to depend on. It's clear that humans can purchase foods much easier than the arduous process of harvesting it in the past. There's no need for most people to spend long hours on their farms while facing a food shortage at the end. Our family's experience is a compelling case for this. My grandfather used to manage several lands, and he was supposed to take care of multiple livestock. According to him, most of his arduous work was useless since diseases would have destroyed all the crops at the end of the year. Besides, the domestic animals were possibly got infected and eventually died. As a result, his family always suffered from food shortages, which exposed him to a massive stress level. Experiencing anxiety leads him to experience heart strokes, which finally caused his death at a young age.
Furthermore, there was no vast knowledge about the importance of nutritious food in the old days. Therefore, most families were vitamin or mineral deficient since they were mostly relying on rice and grains containing high amounts of carbohydrate. Also, people were not aware of the deadly effects of the fats on their physical health. Thus, elders usually suffer from cardiac problems as a result of excessive use of fats. In the modern world, we see an increasing focus on the usage of vegetables and fruits, which are nutritious food sources. For instance, my cousins, who used to live with my grandparents in their childhood, tend to consume much more oil while cooking and preparing food since they grew up seeing my grandmother cooking.
Conversely, my mom is so strict about the amount of salt and oil that she uses (for cooking) to cook meals, which led me to be cautious. Besides, they don't consider fruits as an essential part of their daily diet. However, my mom provides us with an adequate amount of fruits during the day. Last year, when my cousin took a blood test, the amount of non-essential fats was so high in her blood that doctor asked her to stop using oil in her diet. Also, she was suffering from high blood pressure, which eliminated salt consumption in her diet now. In conclusion, being unaware of harmful edible materials can disadvantage your health and reduce your life span, like what used to happen regularly in the old times.
From what has been discussed, we can safely conclude that diets and eating habits can play a primary role in human life duration. It's because people encountered food shortage and anxiety due to this shortage, and the food they had consumed was not nutritious enough in the past. All in all, this caused them to suffer significant physical challenges and eventually live much shorter than modern humans.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, conversely, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 24.0651302605 229% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 78.0 41.998997996 186% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2672.0 1615.20841683 165% => OK
No of words: 542.0 315.596192385 172% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92988929889 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82502781895 4.20363070211 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61902952277 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 307.0 176.041082164 174% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566420664207 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 811.8 506.74238477 160% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 16.0721442886 180% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9813546133 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1379310345 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6896551724 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.06896551724 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101230090392 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0248484157939 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0282102776104 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.055952995796 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220639139696 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 136.0 78.4519038076 173% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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