There's no doubt about the undeniable changes in human life span in the modern world. Many factors are playing essential roles in this change. In my perspective, the most critical parameter is the improvements in our diets. I will pinpoint the two most prominent rationales in what follows.
The first reason to champion this standpoint is that humans achieved various technologies during history, which helped them harvest crops more efficiently. Due to these agricultural enhancements, more food is available for us to consume and livestock to depend on. It's clear that humans can purchase foods much easier than the arduous process of harvesting it in the past. There's no need for most people to spend long hours on their farms while facing a food shortage at the end. Our family's experience is a compelling case for this. My grandfather used to manage several lands, and he was supposed to take care of multiple livestock. According to him, most of his arduous work was useless since diseases would have destroyed all the crops at the end of the year. Besides, the domestic animals were possibly got infected and eventually died. As a result, his family always suffered from food shortages, which exposed him to a massive stress level. Experiencing anxiety leads him to experience heart strokes, which finally caused his death at a young age.
Furthermore, there was no vast knowledge about the importance of nutritious food in the old days. Therefore, most families were vitamin or mineral deficient since they were mostly relying on rice and grains containing high amounts of carbohydrate. Also, people were not aware of the deadly effects of the fats on their physical health. Thus, elders usually suffer from cardiac problems as a result of excessive use of fats. In the modern world, we see an increasing focus on the usage of vegetables and fruits, which are nutritious food sources. For instance, my cousins, who used to live with my grandparents in their childhood, tend to consume much more oil while cooking and preparing food since they grew up seeing my grandmother cooking.
Conversely, my mom is so strict about the amount of salt and oil that she uses (for cooking) to cook meals, which led me to be cautious. Besides, they don't consider fruits as an essential part of their daily diet. However, my mom provides us with an adequate amount of fruits during the day. Last year, when my cousin took a blood test, the amount of non-essential fats was so high in her blood that doctor asked her to stop using oil in her diet. Also, she was suffering from high blood pressure, which eliminated salt consumption in her diet now. In conclusion, being unaware of harmful edible materials can disadvantage your health and reduce your life span, like what used to happen regularly in the old times.
From what has been discussed, we can safely conclude that diets and eating habits can play a primary role in human life duration. It's because people encountered food shortage and anxiety due to this shortage, and the food they had consumed was not nutritious enough in the past. All in all, this caused them to suffer significant physical challenges and eventually live much shorter than modern humans.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, conversely, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 78.0 52.1666666667 150% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2670.0 1977.66487455 135% => OK
No of words: 542.0 407.700716846 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92619926199 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82502781895 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61902952277 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 307.0 212.727598566 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566420664207 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 811.8 618.680645161 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9813546133 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0689655172 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6896551724 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.06896551724 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.85842293907 363% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101230090392 0.236089414692 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0248484157939 0.076458572812 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0282102776104 0.0737576698707 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.055952995796 0.150856017488 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220639139696 0.0645574589148 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 136.0 86.8835125448 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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