Global warming is one of the biggest threats to ourenvironment. What causes global warming? What solutionsare there to this problem?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevantexamples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, people have to face some threats. One of the biggest threats is global warming. For example, in twentieth, averages temperature of earth increased approximately 0,6 degrees. In this essay, I will look at some of the causes of this situation. I will then move on to consider what people can do to deal with this problem.
The first reasons is cutting down trees. Due to population growth, people deforest. Besides, most cars, power stations and factories use fossil fuels, when they operate to cause growth of cacbon dioxide in the air. On other hand, increasing temperatures because of air pollution. Most smokes, dusts are eliminated from traffic facilities. Moreover, industrial activities also have a part in raising air waste. We have so many industrial parks in large province, such as Binh Duong, Dong Nai. Finally, now, developing technology lead to use so much electricity such as air conditioned, washing- machine, refrigerator. Therefore, to meet this demand, thermal power stations have to produce more electricity.
Regarding with global warming, we have to find solution. Firstly, we need to invest in renewable and clean energy sources such as solar and wind power. Next, governments should make strong laws and give punishment to those who destroy forests. In addition, planting more trees is very necessary. Finally, using public transports is a good method. For instance, travelling by bus is encouraged in Ho Chi Minh City where has dense populations. This not only help to reduce greenhouse gases but also decrease air pollution.
In conclusion, we can say desolating forest and air pollution are two main causes that global warming. We should use the law, clean energy and planting trees to prevent the situation. Everyone has to make effort to be more “green”.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, look, moreover, regarding, so, then, therefore, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24482758621 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88933625102 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668965517241 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.4557423386 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 63.375 106.682146367 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.0833333333 20.7667163134 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125118137201 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0345927100594 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056077998825 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0801847875442 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625642654204 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 50.2224549098 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.22 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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