Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today.
What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue?
these days, the economies of countries around the world are growing rapidly. however, not all regions are equally economically developed. because of that unequal distribution, it has increased political differences, especially the gap between rich and poor between urban and rural areas. The gap between rich and poor is widening. solving this problem is a very difficult thing because the disparity in economic income between regions is very large.
The uneven distribution of the economy has many causes. The main reason, however, is the country's topography and population distribution. Often rural areas, highlands and high mountains have obvious differences from urban areas in terms of people's occupations, lifestyles, means of transportation, and material needs. this clearly affects the economic income of the regions. For the urban economy, with favorable terrain advantages, this area easily attracts people here, the transportation and service industries develop rapidly. it is clear that the advantages of material and infrastructure in the city help people to have a full life and a stable income than people living in the countryside. it is because of the disparity between urban and rural areas that there are many problems that cause the gap between rich and poor to increase.
many countries around the world have solved this problem by redistributing the population, building more factories, build more infrastructure in rural areas to reduce unemployment rate and increase the average income per person in the countryside. however, the disparity between rural and urban areas has not decreased much. this problem is very difficult to solve completely. But these policies increase the standard of living in the countryside which helps a lot for the overall economy of country.
In conclusion, the unequal economic development brings many disparities in living standards in rural and urban areas, causing the gap between rich and poor to increase. this problem needs to be given more effective policies by the state to solve quickly and effectively.
- Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue 11
- In recent years some countries have experienced very rapid economic development This has resulted in much higher standards of living in urban areas but not in the countryside This situation may bring some problems for the country as a whole What are these 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, as to, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1755.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.484375 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94273303824 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48125 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.9405121613 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7777777778 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 7.06120827912 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0155158075495 0.244688304435 6% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00547310255878 0.084324248473 6% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0106630014972 0.0667982634062 16% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0120878859536 0.151304729494 8% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0032983190756 0.056905535591 6% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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