Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today.
What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue?
Regarding environmental issues, global warming is one of the most debatable challenges that the world is encountering up to present. There are several causes for that issue while some measures can be taken to address the situation.
When it comes to this problem, deforestation is considered one of the major contributors which has exacerbated the situation. Since trees absorb the carbon dioxide from the air, a huge number of trees logged results in a large amount of carbon dioxide remaining in the atmosphere. To illustrate, the recorded carbon dioxide is constantly escalating when four million trees are cut down each year. Deforestation accounts for about 15 percent of global carbon emissions, more than the sum total of cars and trucks in the world. One of measures that could be implemented to tackle this issue is the government should impose stricter punishment for illegal logging and forest clearance. Apart from the officials, individuals should actively take part in afforestation community activities, which greatly contributes to the earth’s green atmosphere.
Another cause is that air conditioners are increasingly exploited for cooling demand worldwide. In more detail, the more powerful planet-warming gases from the machines are discharged outside, the more global temperature is rising. Especially, there is an upward trend in selecting air conditioners for making spaces cooler in some areas such as the United States, the Middle East and Asia. To mitigate this issue, the governments should promulgate education about the negative environmental impacts of air conditioners for people, particularly for each family. Inhabitants would tend to limit their usage if they were knowledgeable about the great damage to their own environment. As individuals, it would be better if residents planted more trees in the garden to create shadows and used alternative appliances such as evaporative coolers.
In conclusion, deforestation and air conditioner overuse are two culprits behind global warming. If the solutions mentioned above are worked out effectively, the severe threat can be alleviated and the earth can be saved.
- Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue 84
- The diagram below shows two different processes for manufacturing black tea Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words 56
- The diagram below shows two different processes for manufacturing black tea Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words 56
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 833, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...greatly contributes to the earth’s green atmosphere. Another cause is that ai...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, so, while, apart from, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1826.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55015197568 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08648807906 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598784194529 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.1531571435 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 114.125 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5625 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0625 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190229151856 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587639151294 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654798833404 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135234337715 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0968720044236 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 833, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...greatly contributes to the earth’s green atmosphere. Another cause is that ai...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, so, while, apart from, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1826.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55015197568 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08648807906 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598784194529 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.1531571435 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 114.125 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5625 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0625 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190229151856 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587639151294 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654798833404 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135234337715 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0968720044236 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.