Government investment in the arts, such as museums and theatre is a waste of money. The government must invest this money in public services instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
This is a fact that arts are the beauty of its nation. While I accept that the government must protect the arts by spending money on it, I also support that other services should also be funded by the higher authorities for the overall development of the country.
On the one hand, the government should invest money in the arts and crafts in the country. Firstly, some people pursue it as a profession such as artists and craftsmen earn their bread and butter by making new kinds of arts and different designs. Secondly, if the government will spend money on these sculptures then it could encourage tourists to visit the country which leads to economic growth in the country as tourists invest money for visiting these tourist places. For example, India is a diverse country where different and attractive arts can be found and people from different countries come to see these arts in India which resulted in enhancing the growth and fame of the country. Finally, protecting the arts means protecting the history of the country which reflects the traditions and customs of the country. Moreover, modern arts are different than traditional art, therefore, the government should spend money to save a variety of arts.
On the other hand, the government should not only give protection to the arts but also spend some amount of money on other services in the country. First of all, road accidents are a serious issue, so the government must invest money in the infrastructure of the nation such as making wide roads implement traffic rules to control these accidents. Besides this, the government should provide either medical or educational facilities to the natives of the country as these are the primary requirements and no one can survive without these facilities. Last but not least, providing monetary and nonmonetary benefits can curb poverty from the country.
Conclusion, although protecting the arts is a fundamental duty of government but the government must heed on the basic facilities to the country for the holistic development of the country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, as to, for example, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1723.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03801169591 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69009820718 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476608187135 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.6050372192 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.538461538 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3076923077 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6923076923 7.06120827912 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2750480304 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115936735056 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077925306117 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183834466954 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0221447066447 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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