In Britain families should pay for the old people or government?
Now a days people prefer nuclear families instead of extended families. While I think that families should take care of old people but government should spend some part of revenue on old and unable people.
On the one hand, old people must be paid by their families as this is fundamental duty of young ones to take care of old people in their home in order to look after them which leads values among youngsters. Secondly,if old people would live in the orphanage then they will not be able to get a perfect environment as they get at home. What is more they might not feel comfortable on orher places because in old age people want to talk with their kids and other family members which gives them happiness and joy. Finally,orphanages may be good for those who do not have families. Most importantly, young ones need values which are infused by old and wise people at home which gives them experience of how to handle tough situations in life for being successful.
On the other hand, in order to improve the living conditions of old people government should provide some monetary benefits to them which would result in better living of old ones. For example, pensions schemed by higher authorities to the old people is a large initiative.
Conclusion, although government should provide benefits for taking care of old ones but families must be first to look after old people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, i think, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1151.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77593360996 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55788852077 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54356846473 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 355.5 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4177767671 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.1 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.401378830234 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.180338391865 0.084324248473 214% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0971515102479 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.299947597699 0.151304729494 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618122955726 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.