The government’s investment in art, music and theater is a waste of money. Government should invest these funds in public service instead.
To what extent do you agree with this statement?
- For being a perfect county or state there are many aspects which supposed to be taken care by the government. However, some people believe that the government should be more focused into public service instead of allocating the money into art, music and theaters. This essay will discuss as to why it is not waste of money to allocate the significant amount to the art, music and theatres.
To begin with, there are many reasons why it is important for the government to spend more funds on public service. Firstly, it is very important to have advance medical facilities and schools with innovative technology for the development of a better society. For example, in current corona pandemic if hospitals do not have significant amount of medical equipment and the lager infrastructure, so it will be the cause of biggest failure for any government. Secondly, as the most of the countries’ revenue is collected from the public through the taxation system, it is imperative that governments spend the available fund for the most effective public services of the nation which is beneficial to society at large.
However, it is important to have advance and innovative technology for better life but government should not neglect to art, music and theaters as well. Nowadays these kinds of activities are most popular among new generation. For instance, in India and all over the world there are many reality shows are being held, to encourage those who are very good in their unique technique. Those are the platforms people can use to show their talent to world and make their county and parents to feel proud. Furthermore, theaters are playing a significant role for people’s life to get relaxation and entertainment after their daily boring lifestyle.
In conclusion, although it is important in invest on public service for a better future but it is not waste of money to invest on arts, music and theaters as it is a part of people’s life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 421, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the biggest'.
Suggestion: of the biggest
...infrastructure, so it will be the cause of biggest failure for any government. Secondly, a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1633.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97865853659 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75545620027 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509146341463 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.0484289043 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.615384615 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2307692308 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5384615385 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265791040601 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0944423438525 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0937542633777 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178437252909 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0743527596307 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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