It is argued that for the development and progress kf a country authorities provide more funds to teach science subjects such as medical , Information technology and computer science in comparison to fund other subject . This essay agrees with this statement because science helps to cure diseases and also helps in development of nations by providing job opportunities to individuals.
In the field of medical science has its vital role . As with the help of science there are many machines are provided which helps to know the symptoms of the diseases like cancer, heart attack and brain tumuor in early stages which helps to cure these diseases in there early stages. Because of this the fear of these fatal diseases is going down. In a recent survey found that the death rate with these fatal diseases in United Kingdom is decreased by 40 % as compared to past.
Moreover, developed nations like U.S.A, Russia and U.K are providing science subjects in schools which helps in getting jobs to the individuals as the companies also required skilled workers. In addition to, with the technology new industries are made which provides job opportunities to the unemployed persons which helps in the economical growth of them. For instance, United States of America has done more work on science which helps to decrease there unemployment rate by 25% in last 20 years.
To sum up, In modern world science subjects are main which helps in development of nations and made them strong in the field of economic and health as well.
- The government should allocate more funding to teaching sciences rather than other subjects in order for a country to develop and progress. To what extent do you agree? 87
- Artificial intelligence will soon replace teachers in the classroom.Do you agree with this statement?What is an alternative to traditional face-to-face teaching? 73
- The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia’s share of the Japanese tourist market.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. 67
- The charts below show reasons for travel and the main issues for the travelling public in the US in 2009. 84
- In modern world, many children spend a lot of time in front of computers,television and smartphones. This is very harmful to them. To what extent do you agree. 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 65, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'authority'?
Suggestion: authority
...e development and progress kf a country authorities provide more funds to teach science sub...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 121, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ide more funds to teach science subjects such as medical , Information technology...
^^
Line 1, column 138, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... teach science subjects such as medical , Information technology and computer sci...
^^
Line 1, column 220, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ence in comparison to fund other subject . This essay agrees with this statement b...
^^
Line 2, column 51, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ld of medical science has its vital role . As with the help of science there are m...
^^
Line 2, column 285, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e these diseases in there early stages. Because of this the fear of these fatal disease...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 38, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
... Moreover, developed nations like U.S.A, Russia and U.K are providing science s...
^
Line 3, column 54, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: K
...eloped nations like U.S.A, Russia and U.K are providing science subjects in schoo...
^
Line 3, column 331, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...e unemployed persons which helps in the economical growth of them. For instance, United St...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, moreover, so, well, for instance, in addition, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1268.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97254901961 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61182000391 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.8476499058 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.8 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168193612111 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762025784155 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104174466524 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122758112079 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106273580581 0.056905535591 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.