In recent years, violence scenes have appeared in many TV programmes and films. It is thought that this will lead to the increase of criminalization and many people claim that this should be reduced by the government. Personally, I agree with this statement.
First and foremost, the violence in films provides many impacts on individuals, especially children who are not yet fully aware of the world. To be more specific, children tend to imitate what they see, therefore, these scenes could greatly influence a child’s upbringing. Also, with the pupils who are often afraid and have a weakness of heart, this will lead them to obsession. Many articles show that lots of pupils have strange, scary actions and use an object that can cause damage to attack the opponent like the hero or criminal which do those action scenes. In addition, the fighting and killing scenes on television can make youngsters addicted and have distorted thoughts. As a result, they will cause actions that make friendships and family relationships worse.
Moreover, not only children have been affected by this but adults can also receive this adverse effect. Long-term exposure to gory sights can actually render people desensitized, and they come to expect aggressive behavior. People who have lost their sense of reality and fiction will replicate crime scenes and acts.
In conclusion, controlling the violence scenes in films is critical, and governments must carry the main responsibility. The grounds for this are that the awareness of children might be influenced and also, the adults might commit crimes.
- The government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to decrease the level of violent crimes in the society To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 67
- In some cultures the old age is more valued while in some cultures the youth is more valued Discuss both views and give your own opinion 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25680933852 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73347342037 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610894941634 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2676940861 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3571428571 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156564343015 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610430543017 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666505580553 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102497925569 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459187594414 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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