It is true that many breakthrough achievements in science contribute to the development of countries all around the world. However, I completely disagree with the idea that the authorities should fund science courses instead of other curriculums to make progress for countries.
To begin with, it is undeniable that investing in teaching science in school play a significant part in helping a country develop. Many research programs are in high demand for academic resources support. With financial aid, students have the chance to study aboard to learn the latest scientific achievements or communicate with some most intelligent scientists. This can inspire their enthusiasm in a related field so that they are capable to conduct their program and go further study. Many of these students later became scientists and devote themselves to fight with problems such as diseases and poverty, improving the living standard in a country.
However, despite science, the development of a country depends on a wide range of efforts including culture, economy, and politics. For example, with the growth of the economy, the governments are more able to build infrastructures such as railways and roads so that it will be more convenient for people to travel to another city. Apart from this, globalization is an unavoidable trend so there is an urgent need for bilingual talents in order to promote international cooperation. All of these benefits mentioned above are based on people of different subjects. If the government reject to invest in teaching these subjects in schools, there will not be much progress.
In conclusion, I disagree with this idea and I believe that the governments’ money should be invested in all kinds of curriculums fairly because it would be impossible for a country to make great progress without them.
- In most countries, prison is an effective solution to the problem of crime. Some people think it is a more effective solution to provide education for those who violate the law. To what extend do you agree or disagree? 61
- The government should invest money in teaching science rather than in other subjects for a country s development and progress To what extent do you agree or disagree 44
- In many countries, prison is the most common solution for crimes. However, many think that better education is the most effective way to prevent people from committing further crime.To what extent do you agree or disagree. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 224, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ry to make great progress without them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, thus, apart from, for example, in conclusion, such as, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28767123288 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03756119397 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599315068493 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7799695581 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.769230769 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257077978019 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852513670104 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0831411326846 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16669904904 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624594092008 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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