It is true that in many parts of world, people who have violated the law are sentenced to jail, which is an effective way of deterring crime. However, I completely agree with the idea that providing people with a better education is a more reasonable choice.
The first reason I support this opinion is that people with higher levels of education are less likely to commit crimes because they have the ability to support themselves in cities. It is apparent that most criminals are in poor education which means they are not able to find a job in cities. In order to get rid of poverty, they are more likely to commit crimes such as robbing, stealing and defrauding. However, if we offer them better education, they are always able to find a satisfying career that will reward them with a decent life, and they will never think of committing any crime.
Education improves teenagers’ moral standards which enable them to tell right from wrong so that they will build a robust inner wall against any antisocial behaviors. The rate of juvenile criminality, in many countries, keeps on increasing in recent decades, which jeopardize the development of the society. Those young people who break the laws are in common that they are easily influenced by the pornography and violence which spread in the media due to the loss of ability that distinguishing right and wrong. As a result, they are misguided to copy the dangerous behaviors such as selling drugs or gambling which can be prevented from offering them better education.
In conclusion, I believe that it is a more effective way to solve the problem of crime by offering a better education because of its benefits in helping people find a job and reducing the juvenile crime rate.
- In most countries, prison is an effective solution to the problem of crime. Some people think it is a more effective solution to provide education for those who violate the law. To what extend do you agree or disagree? 61
- In many countries, prison is the most common solution for crimes. However, many think that better education is the most effective way to prevent people from committing further crime.To what extent do you agree or disagree. 67
- The government should invest money in teaching science rather than in other subjects for a country s development and progress To what extent do you agree or disagree 44
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83946488294 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65994172597 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528428093645 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 34.3352456072 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.545454545 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1818181818 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45454545455 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225851671768 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.085836820287 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376086728384 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143972720661 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377894829799 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.