The government should reduce the amount of money spent on local environmental problem and instead of increase funding into urgent and more threatening issue such as global warming.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In modern era, the Human's life mainly affected by environmental issue and global warming. Therefore,many of consider that higher authority should decrease the spending expenditure on common environmental hazard. since they rise funding for global warming. Which is more dangerous for society.
I firmly agree with notion of the related topic.
To start with that,there are many reasons of increase funding for hazardous problems. The foremost one is, nowadays myriad number of issues affecting the human's life. Such as deforestation,flood and drought. Following this, because of deforestation ample of states suffer from lack of quality of life and faced many disease.such as,they consume less amount of oxygen and increase the air pollution. Sometimes the growing construction sites also affect the natural water sources and it would create the problem as flood. To cite an example, recently India faced the problem from cyclone and many people affected from it. So, higher authority should raise the coins for such issue. It will beneficial to people.
In addition to this, if funding increased by regime so it will helpful for human's life as well as the development of society. Furthermore, manifold places affected from the drought because of this people faced problem on their day-to-day life. Even they do not able to find a way to solve this problem. So, government organize some events for collecting some banknote from other part of society and give necessary help to those people. However, the higher authority cut the amount of money for local environmental issue because such kind of issues are easy to solve by people's understanding and awareness. So, for that not much banknote required to spent for it.
In conclusion, I reaffirm my position that both issue are important to solve in today's world, but the threatening issue are creating by global warming is an alarming issue. Such as deforestation,flood and drought. So,it is vital to raise funding for this problem, which is more beneficial to natural resources and development of society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, well, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as well as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1740.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28875379939 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89115115489 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547112462006 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.9394061662 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0909090909 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9545454545 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86363636364 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215668027701 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620398686041 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416233420403 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121529190065 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457817367815 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.81 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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