Throng of people believe that government should invest more funds for railways transportation system instead of enhancing roads , while others think conversely . I value the railways ' practical impacts considering two reasons which are associated as below.
On the one hand , either technology and modernity are two insurmountable parts of today s' life which make people utilize the last model of the facilities such as new cars ,consequently , a great number of cars are in roads and cities, thus, traffic would ne crucial problem for the government in result. In addition , by using public transportation system such as subway , the people s' time will not be wasted in traffic and they can use their time better by studying newspaper and book and also be less stressful compared to using their cars. I personally think that enhancing railways has not only suitable impacts on traffic but also increases the society s' mental health. For example, in china , although they are known as a populated nation, the government has solved the traffic problem easily by developing the railways and people are not worry for being on time.
On the other hand , the government should consider the environmental issues which play a vital role either for current people and next generation . Regardless of financial factors , making extra roads has destructive affects which needs to destroy more trees and wild life that would lead to extinction of some animal species . Further ,developing roads has a straight connection with air pollution and people will suffer from some heart and breathing problems. Thus, enhancing railways seems logical but applying them depends on people enthusiasm that the government can motivate them in some ways. First , because of some general reasons such as more number of people can be transferred by railways , it costs less and also it is safer using them in comparison of using their cars. Secondly , children should be familiar with the transportation system and its advantages from first level of education and they will appreciate it during their life.
In conclusion, I reaffirm my position which enhancing and investing money on railways will be more beneficial rather than making more roads.
- Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 73
- Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people's lives others think that adult life brings more happiness,in spite of greater responsibilities.Discuss both these views and give your opinion 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, conversely, first, if, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1860.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22471910112 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77049570605 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530898876404 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.6196834161 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.076923077 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3846153846 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5384615385 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118278404212 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493527530588 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402691554022 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0945052700612 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422668801252 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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