Government should spend money on railways rather than roads.
There are mainly two important aspects of develop the country is a fast & safe transportation system and improved communication. Some commentators say that the government ought to allocate more budget on rail construction than roadways. In my point of view, the transportation budget should be balanced on road and railways.
First of all, investing more money in a modern railway means that people can get all around the country faster. Although the fare for rail is much cheaper than road vehicles, that's why people frequently use the train for long-distance traveling. also, train passengers do not have to deal with any congestion, and the train can achieve higher speeds than cars. Therefore people will spend less time commuting and more time in productive work, which will be helpful in society. For instance, the Indian government recently unveiled a plan to connect cities in North india and East india via a high-speed rail network, and this will reduce the time of commuting.
On the other hand, government buses or private cars play an inevitable role in our daily life. they are considered the easiest and the most convenient method for transportation. also, they are quintessential for short distances, where the train can not be used. Furthermore, roads can reach everywhere and a link between the distinct facilities the people need every day such as houses, shopping centers, and hospitals. Consequently, the problem of traffic congestion will be solved by maintaining and constructing new roads. For example, a recent study conducted in Russia has shown that increasing the budget spent on roads significantly reduced motor vehicle accidents by 25%. Thus, roads are a crucial part of the design of any modern city.
To sum up, it can be seen that both roads and railways are complementary methods for convenient and easy traveling. I do recommend that the government set an organized plan to improve both means of transportation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, such as, first of all, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1655.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23734177215 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9789837958 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620253164557 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.3801006026 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.3529411765 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5882352941 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41176470588 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144947501275 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0383155912957 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0339156777885 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0811899938741 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286627001304 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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