Government should spend more money on medical research and less on researching the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, people are facing many problems related to environment issues as well as number of diseases spread to worldwide which is also serious issue for the people. Government of cam country is investing a such amount for research related to medical and environment field. So, many people argue that government should give priority medical research over environment. while many reject this argument. I disagree with this statement. This essay will further elaborate my view on why I disagree with this statement.
To begin with, there are myriad reason why government should spend more amount on researching related to environment. From these, the predominant reason is stabilizing the Climate change. There are many things are responsible for climate change like pollution, greenhouse gases, deforestation and so on. Government should spend money for the alternative thing to reduce pollution because pollution is main factor as well as serious problem for human and other animal. Government should spend money on electric car producing company because flue car produced highest number of air pollution. Although government should spend money for the purification of air because today's air contains many harmful gases which can affect nature and Ozan layer which can protect people from the sunlight. If government and people try to finding alternative way for such thing so that we will stabilize the climate change.
In addition, the second supreme reason is globalization and increasing population. This means that in today world, many people migrate into city and because of that land are uses for the home and apartments and farming land are reducing done by day so the production of eatable plants are reduce and the other problem is increasing the population. Better prevention for disease and good medical service are increased day by day, so these trends responsible for population, Because of this reason, government should spend more amount to plants which can produce in more amount, anyplace and grow in less amount and also spend amount on plant to maintain environmental food chain.
However, there are some reasons why I am not totally disagree with this statement. The reason is to cure people from the serious and uncure disease. Government should spend money on some programs which can try to prevent or produce vaccine for such disease like cancer, AIDS and others. This type of project or research should take more time as well as more money for getting result. For example, we all knew about corona virus and also see the millions of humans died every day in all over world till vaccine was not found. But after the found tablet and vaccine, we lived out in better conditions. So, there is the reason why government should spend money on medical research.
In conclusion, we all try to understand that funding on both is crucial for people. Climate research and medical research are essential for the better life. In suggestion, government should spend related amount on both research and reduce the spending on unwanted field or area.
- The bar chart below illustrates the use of tobacco products by secondary school students in the United States Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words
- Government should spend more money on medical research and less on researching the environment To what extent do you agree or disagree 67
- The bar chart below illustrates the use of tobacco products by secondary school students in the United States Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words
- The bar chart below illustrates the use of tobacco products by secondary school students in the United States Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words
- Government should spend more money on medical research and less on researching the environment To what extent do you agree or disagree 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: While
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Suggestion: many rejects
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Suggestion: produced the highest
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Suggestion: reduced
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, so, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 33.0 8.3376753507 396% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2575.0 1615.20841683 159% => OK
No of words: 497.0 315.596192385 157% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18108651911 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72159896747 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59429101256 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.458752515091 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 796.5 506.74238477 157% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.9628478258 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0384615385 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1153846154 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76923076923 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284843944839 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.097180235046 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106488097378 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189688891992 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558294807458 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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