The government's investment in arts, music and theatre is a waste of money. Governments should invest thesefunds in public services instead.To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 31, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
Governments revenue is mostly spend on arts,music and theater rather than e...
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Line 1, column 44, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , music
...ernments revenue is mostly spend on arts,music and theater rather than emphasizing on ...
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Line 3, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...phasizing on public services. Therefor,the public services will not be developed.S...
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Line 3, column 52, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
...e public services will not be developed.So,i do not completely acoord on wastage o...
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Line 3, column 54, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , i
...public services will not be developed.So,i do not completely acoord on wastage of ...
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Line 3, column 55, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ublic services will not be developed.So,i do not completely acoord on wastage of ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Entertainment
...coord on wastage of money spending on entertainment.This essay will discuss both the views ...
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Line 5, column 15, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...ge of money spending on entertainment.This essay will discuss both the views and a...
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Line 5, column 70, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... discuss both the views and arrive into an conclusion. To embark on,they...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ews and arrive into an conclusion. To embark on,they are multiple way to de...
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Line 9, column 18, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , they
...to an conclusion. To embark on,they are multiple way to develop the public ...
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Line 9, column 72, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Firstly
...iple way to develop the public services.Firstly,it should maintain good roads and keep ...
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Line 9, column 79, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...y to develop the public services.Firstly,it should maintain good roads and keep t...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...t should maintain good roads and keep the city neat and clean.Secondly,government...
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Line 11, column 25, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Secondly
...oads and keep the city neat and clean.Secondly,government should provide free food and...
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Line 11, column 33, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , government
... keep the city neat and clean.Secondly,government should provide free food and house for ...
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Line 11, column 95, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...vide free food and house for the people who are financually weak. Moreover,the govern...
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Line 13, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...ple who are financually weak. Moreover,the government is investing a lot on entert...
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Line 13, column 70, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[4]
Message: “So , if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...vesting a lot on entertainment purpose. So,if the government spend 30 to 40 percent o...
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Line 13, column 72, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , if
...sting a lot on entertainment purpose. So,if the government spend 30 to 40 percent o...
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Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Public
...ernment spend 30 to 40 percent on the public services then it will be developed in a...
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Line 15, column 43, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a easy way" with adverb for "easy"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...blic services then it will be developed in a easy way.The country like India is getting corru...
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Line 15, column 46, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...c services then it will be developed in a easy way.The country like India is gett...
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Line 15, column 57, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...then it will be developed in a easy way.The country like India is getting corrupted...
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Line 17, column 13, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , if
...upted by the politicians. For instance,if government invest on public services th...
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Line 19, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Person
... citizen on the country becuase every person pay tax. Moreover,if the cit...
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Line 23, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ry becuase every person pay tax. Moreover,if the city is developed then i...
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Line 23, column 15, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , if
...ry person pay tax. Moreover,if the city is developed then it will prob...
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Line 23, column 96, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Arts
...obably have many entertainment programs.Arts,music and theaters are also needed wh...
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Line 23, column 100, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , music
...ly have many entertainment programs.Arts,music and theaters are also needed when the...
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Line 25, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Are
...ment programs.Arts,music and theaters are also needed when there is less poverty ...
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Line 25, column 66, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...e is less poverty rate in their country.For example,punjab has 0% poverty rate baca...
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Line 25, column 77, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , punjab
...overty rate in their country.For example,punjab has 0% poverty rate bacause every pun...
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Line 27, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Punjabi
...jab has 0% poverty rate bacause every punjabi do some or the other work. T...
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Line 31, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...punjabi do some or the other work. To recapitualte, it is programatic to sp...
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Line 33, column 30, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[2]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...grammes. If the proverty rate is less then it is better to spend on arts,music and...
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Line 33, column 64, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , music
... less then it is better to spend on arts,music and theater.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1210.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 214.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65420560748 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.63809580863 2.80592935109 130% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602803738318 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.6569836817 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.444444444 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7777777778 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.88888888889 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 13.0 4.38176352705 297% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 37.0 5.01903807615 737% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190280769535 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877895635956 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468846168349 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0674707480761 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531580962011 0.056905535591 93% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.79 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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