Roads and Railways are important modes of communications used by human beings in their daily life. Railways are used by more number of people to travel both longer and shorter distance, and it has many advantages which I will be explaining in the paragraphs below. I agree that government should spend more money on railways rather than roads.
Firstly, railways are fastest means of transportation as there it avoids traffic people can reach their destination more quickly, they can travel long distance while they are lying down as there are facilities to stretch legs while travelling. At every station people come to sell snacks, tea and food due to which travellers feel very comfortable as they get everything they need while they are sitting in one place.
Secondly, it is safer to travel by train as there are no other vehicles, and also comfortable unlike roads which have large number of holes. Travelling by train helps in socialization as you meet new people everyday and make friendship with them, a sense of brotherhood is encouraged. There are toilets and basins present in train which is an essential necessity especially for elders, children and pregnant women.
There are people, on the other hand who feel government should spend money on roads because most of them use private vehicles to travel and if roads are repaired they can drive smoothly and good roads help in reduction of traffic and accidents. I however feel improvement in railways will encourage people to use public vehicle and reduce number of private vehicles on road.
To sum up with, railways are of prime importance to all age groups and hence government should make effort to improve the railway system in order to attract more passengers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 19, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'are the fastest'.
Suggestion: are the fastest
...rather than roads. Firstly, railways are fastest means of transportation as there it avo...
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Line 5, column 208, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...in socialization as you meet new people everyday and make friendship with them, a sense ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'firstly', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'while', 'to sum up', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.258064516129 0.247107183377 104% => OK
Verbs: 0.177419354839 0.155533422707 114% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0935483870968 0.0946595960268 99% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0354838709677 0.0501214627716 71% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0548387096774 0.0437548338989 125% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.138709677419 0.122226691241 113% => OK
Participles: 0.0290322580645 0.0403226058552 72% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.63315206189 2.80594681477 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0354838709677 0.0326793684256 109% => OK
Particles: 0.00645161290323 0.00163938923432 394% => OK
Determiners: 0.0290322580645 0.0861772015684 34% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0258064516129 0.021408717616 121% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0161290322581 0.011925033212 135% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1738.0 1933.35771543 90% => OK
No of words: 289.0 316.048096192 91% => OK
Chars per words: 6.01384083045 6.12580529183 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.346020761246 0.374742101984 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.23875432526 0.28420135186 84% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.16955017301 0.203846283523 83% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.114186851211 0.137316102897 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63315206189 2.80594681477 94% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.037074148 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57785467128 0.56093040696 103% => OK
Word variations: 61.3353041725 60.7387585426 101% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0891783567 68% => OK
Sentence length: 26.2727272727 20.7743622355 126% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8205042591 49.517814964 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.0 127.492653851 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2727272727 20.7743622355 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.09090909091 0.814263465372 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 50.1481597987 49.1944974215 102% => OK
Elegance: 1.59036144578 1.69124875643 94% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157932882423 0.332605444948 47% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.138782271669 0.102741220458 135% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.068573434881 0.0668466124924 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.688329940954 0.534860350844 129% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.153898032229 0.148594505496 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877925665713 0.134430193775 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685598975498 0.0742795772207 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.223817922722 0.324371583561 69% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0329092954152 0.0638462369009 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108512189563 0.228012699653 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467143867625 0.058150111329 80% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 5.90881763527 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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