governments should spend money on railways rather than road
to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement
People are of the opinion that more funds should be allocated to the railway sector rather roads.However others argue that roads such as highways and motorways provide the country with a pertinent source of income and route of transportation for national and multinational companies.In my opinion roads should be allocated more budget than that of railways
Communication sector is considered as a game changer in a countries economy.Roads provide a proper and safe route of transportation to different companies local or foreign companies.Morover it provides the country with a influx on money which in turn has a positive effect on the countries economic growth.For instance a study was conducted by the university of Lahore that in the last 10 years there has been a substantial growth in Pakistan’s gdp after there were investments made on highways and motorways
Secondly many people oppose the this notion and believe goverments should provide the railway department with a greater allocations of funds.These people bekibe that trains provide the countries citizens in the lower socioeconomic bracket to travel to there native villages in a less expensive mode of tranport.For example a survey was published in dawn news which showed 44 percent people demanding higher fund allocation to the railway department
To conclude money invested in roads such as highways and motorways has had a positive impact on the countries economy and provided the citizens with easier routes of tranports
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1273.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4170212766 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15454933867 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570212765957 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 235.0 20.2975951904 1158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1273.0 106.682146367 1193% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 235.0 20.7667163134 1132% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 84.0 7.06120827912 1190% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122407604938 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122407604938 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0771886223378 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036491288328 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 121.6 13.0946893788 929% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -175.51 50.2224549098 -349% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 96.1 11.3001002004 850% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.64 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 20.13 8.58950901804 234% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 62.0 9.78957915832 633% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 96.0 10.1190380762 949% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 96.0 10.7795591182 891% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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