the position of women in the society has changed markedly in the last twenty years.Many of the problem young people face such juvenile delinquency arise from the fact many married women now and work are not at home for their children
The world has been evolving at a fast pace.Hence the role of females in the world has change in the last two decades.Mostly the women around are working professionals which gives rise to the issue that change in the mindset of the youth might be attributed to the aforementioned topic.In my opinion children can be provided with adult supervision around the clock.
Numbers of female working had increased so have the day care center around the world.Nowadays parents tend to leave there children at babysitting centres, so they are under adult supervision around the clock.This provides a solution as well as a argument against the people against working professionals.For instance a research was published which showed 45 percent of mothers leave there children under supervision either day care centers or family members.
Education system provides the children with a better understand of the good and the bad.Education institutes can provide the children with a basic understanding of life skills and social education which would prevent the children from indulging in untoward activities.For example a newspaper article in the African times in South Africa in 2008 attributed the dip in juvenile crimes to social and youth educational centers created all around South Africa in 2005.
To conclude the new role of women as working professionals had provided the society with a positive new addition.The argument of negligence of children has also been resolved with revolutionary ideas such as day care centers and youth educational centers
- In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and there levels of health and fitness are decreasing.What do you think are causes of these problems and what measures can be taken to solve them 56
- the position of women in the society has changed markedly in the last twenty years.Many of the problem young people face such juvenile delinquency arise from the fact many married women now and work are not at home for their children 56
- some people think that exercise is the key to health while others feel that having a balanced diet is more importantdiscuss both sides and give your opinion 56
- Prevention is better than cure Out of country’s budget a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventive measuresTo what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement 61
- The chart below shows the different level of post school qualifications in Australia and proportion of the men and women who held them in 1999 87
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, well, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 24.0651302605 17% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1311.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37295081967 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06983080857 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532786885246 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 61.0 20.2975951904 301% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.1685828225 49.4020404114 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 327.75 106.682146367 307% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 61.0 20.7667163134 294% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 23.25 7.06120827912 329% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145998465851 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0912383621526 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0230284830117 0.0667982634062 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0912383621526 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0230284830117 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.4 13.0946893788 263% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 1.1 50.2224549098 2% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.3 11.3001002004 250% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.75 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.93 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.4 10.1190380762 261% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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