Nowadays, it is observed that many nations are spending considerable amount of money towards space research. Some people are at the view that government should spend those amount towards solving the presidential issues such as employment, poverty and development of infrastructure in the country. Here in this essay I will elaborate the importance of the both and share my views.
It is very important for any government to solve the basic burning issues of the country and should put more efforts to improve those areas. Food, Shelter, Water crises are the basic necessities which should be provided to any civilians. Solving the unemployment issues by creating the job in the country through funding to small or medium scale entrepreneurs. Shorting out the food crisis by encouraging farmers through various programmes and subsidizing the funds in terms of Loans. To solve such basic issues and improvement are very necessary for any government to gain the trust of the nationalists and growth of the country.
On the other hand, it is equally important for any nation to develop their infrastructure towards space researches for advanced technology, medical sciences and avoid natural calamities. By investing in Space, we can get the images from the satellite. In recent time wireless has become inevitable for technological advancement and which demands more funding.
In conclusion, spending money towards basic necessities are most important for development of the country and it is equally important to spend money towards space researches to compete with other countries. Hence, government should allocate the money wisely, primarily fulfill both the basic necessities and then to space researches to help the nation towards their development.
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Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, so, then, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46153846154 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95388939732 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534798534799 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0064801989 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.692307692 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46153846154 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114990637701 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427081606129 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391068299496 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0784993360333 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476885230047 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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