The graph shows oil production capacity for several Gulf countries between 1990 and 2010.
The bar chart compares the amount of oil produced by six countries through 20 - year period.
Overall, it is clear that, except Qatar, the production of oil in other countries increased and Saudi Arabia was the coutries having the highest oil production capacity.
In 1990, Saudi Arabia produced the largest amount of oil, at 8.5 million of barrels per day, three time higher than Iran, which only produced 3 million barrels per day. Followed by Iran were the UAE, Iraq, Kuwait, which accounted for 2.5, 2 and 1.8 million of barrels per day, respectively. The lowest oil production was belong to Qatar, at only 0.5 million of barrels per day.
After 20 years, the oil production of 5 countries tended to increase. Saudi Arabia witnessed the biggest increase to 15 million of barriels per day. The oil made by Iran, Iraq and Kuwait all rose up by around 2 million of barrels per day through 20 years. The oil production in the UAE stayed at 2.5 million of barrels in 2000 but then also increased to nearly 4 million of barriels per day in 2000. The capacity to produce oil in Qatar rose unremarkably in 2005 and finally fell to approximately 0.5 million of barrels per day at the end of period.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 321, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'belonged'.
Suggestion: belonged
...ectively. The lowest oil production was belong to Qatar, at only 0.5 million of barrel...
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Line 4, column 113, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...di Arabia witnessed the biggest increase to 15 million of barriels per day. The o...
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Line 4, column 401, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... 4 million of barriels per day in 2000. The capacity to produce oil in Qatar rose u...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 2.0 24.0651302605 8% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 984.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 212.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64150943396 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49832318295 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 176.041082164 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504716981132 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 284.4 506.74238477 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3009914875 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150508775803 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824524115201 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563523199582 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115150031824 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398300964683 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 50.2224549098 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 78.4519038076 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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